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war (poem)
Wed Aug 23, 2017 9:38 pm
. due to the lack of places to share the stuff that i make, ill just choose this forum hehehe
how would you say that you've won the war when your country's full of unhealing scars?
how would you say that you've won the war when everything and everyone are gone?
how would you say that you've won the war if there's nothing left for you to restore?
how would you say that you've won the war if even the children bear their own guns?
. any criticism will be appreciated. i aim to be better than what i am, and constructive critisms will help a lot.
how would you say that you've won the war when your country's full of unhealing scars?
how would you say that you've won the war when everything and everyone are gone?
how would you say that you've won the war if there's nothing left for you to restore?
how would you say that you've won the war if even the children bear their own guns?
. any criticism will be appreciated. i aim to be better than what i am, and constructive critisms will help a lot.
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